[Osr-101] rev 20120 - public/osr-101/trunk

[michi at wyona.com]

Author: michi
Date: 2006-11-19 17:47:07 +0100 (Sun, 19 Nov 2006)
New Revision: 20120

Modified:
   public/osr-101/trunk/draft-neutron-protocol-v0.xml
Log:
organization clarified and abstract improved

Modified: public/osr-101/trunk/draft-neutron-protocol-v0.xml
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--- public/osr-101/trunk/draft-neutron-protocol-v0.xml	2006-11-19 16:32:28 UTC (rev 20119)
+++ public/osr-101/trunk/draft-neutron-protocol-v0.xml	2006-11-19 16:47:07 UTC (rev 20120)
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
     </author>
 
     <author initials="T.C." surname="Comiotto" fullname="Thomas Comiotto" role="editor">
-      <organization>Unicom</organization>
+      <organization>Unicom (University of Zurich)</organization>
       <address>
         <phone>+41 44 634 51 31</phone>
         <email>thomas.comiotto at unicom.unizh.ch</email>
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
     <date day="17" month="November" year="2006"/>
 
     <abstract>
-      <t>The Neutron Protocol is an xml-based application level protocol for remote content authoring. Neutron provides a generic API to what common Content Management Systems (CMS) support with respect to content authoring.</t>
+      <t>The Neutron Protocol is an XML-based application-level protocol for remote content authoring. Neutron provides a generic API to what common Content Management Systems (CMS) support with respect to content authoring.</t>
     </abstract>
 
     <note title="Editorial Note">